미스터플루언씨 2018. 6. 23. 04:24







Feedback Video


A video is quite long so I mark each time part of each topic.

Select the part you think you need to watch with the time part below:)




[00:00-01:15] INTRO (Again, I am too much talker (too talkative)

[01:15-05:27] Attendance point. A good student and bad student. 

[05:27-] A Correction on Writing 


+Plus, I forgot to mention what Cephas tutor wanted to me deliver in the video

"Please make a paragraph longer than now. But it's a good sign because it means I can barely find any major mistake on your writings"